Sunday, February 1, 2009

homework!

The students at Pureza de Maria´s school this year have organised a competition.The competition´s money is for the Africa´s children.Because they are very poor and are starving.
In the competition the participants do a race,they run two kilometres for a big park.And the winner will has a prize.
This year the Africa´s children will be very happy.

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  1. Hello Rebecca
    Thanks for sending in your homework. Here are my corrections.

    The students at Pureza de Maria´s school this year have organised a competition. The MONEY EARNED DURING THE competition(´s money) is for (the) Africa´s children because they are very poor and are starving.
    In the competition the participants (do)TAKE PART IN a race; they run two kilometres (for)THROUGH a big park.And the winner will (has)RECEIVE a prize.
    This year (the) Africa´s children will be very happy.

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